"The Dead" Is This Decent?
I walked through the grubby, grudged doors with limited expectations, yet another funeral home, yet another line of caskets. All of which were designed to personally hold the impersonal dead of a man I had not cared for in the least. That’s the humorous reality of an living actor’s life, to pretend to care about [...]
"The Dead" Any Good? What 2 do?
I walked through the grubby, grudged doors with limited expectations, yet another funeral home, yet another line of caskets. All of which were designed to personally hold the impersonal dead of a man I had not cared for in the least. That’s the humorous reality of an living actor’s life, to pretend to care about [...]
Is This Any Good? "The Dead"?
I walked through the grubby, grudged doors with limited expectations, yet another funeral home, yet another line of caskets. All of which were designed to personally hold the impersonal dead of a man I had not cared for in the least. That’s the humorous reality of an living actor’s life, to pretend to care about [...]
Is this a good novel beggening?
Chapter 1; My cat was in my face when I woke up. I didn’t know if it was her purring or the sun beaming in my face, either way. Mom walked in my room, her face showed me that she was beaming. "Guess what today is?" she asked in a very childlike tone. I sighed [...]
Is this writing any good?
Okay, so I’m reposting this question because everyone seemed to have the same answer for me, which was, "Your characters are out of Twilight." So I thought I should do some explaining before I post my excerpt. Drake, at least in my opinion, isn’t a perfect "Edward". It may be very hard to see in [...]


