Is this writing any good?

Okay, so I’m reposting this question because everyone seemed to have the same answer for me, which was, "Your characters are out of Twilight." So I thought I should do some explaining before I post my excerpt. Drake, at least in my opinion, isn’t a perfect "Edward". It may be very hard to see in [...]

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